Bow Quiver
Do I capitalize "Silver" whenever I talk about Artemis's Bow and Arrow?
For example.
When provoked, she can unleash such devastation most wouldn’t expect. Artemis has unique powers. Artemis can morph into any kind of animal she desires to be. Artemis has superior healing powers, and can spread disease, just like her twin brother, Apollo. Artemis is very skilled with her Silver Bow and arrows and could cause a quick and painful death upon her enemies. It is said that Artemis is always seen with a deer by her side. Artemis’s appearance would consist of a knee-long chiton, and always having her Silver Bow and quiver of Silver arrows equipped (Atsma, Aaron. “Artemis”. “Theoi”. 2008).
What do I need to fix, because I talk about her Silver Bow and Arrows a lot...
You need more diversity to your sentence structure, instead of quite a bit of "artemis can (blank)" You Can wokr things around, like this:
Artemis wields a silver bow, with matching arrows, but will only use it in dire situations. Her accuracy can cause a quick, yet painful death to all that provoke her wrath. Just as Apollo, her twin brother, she can unleash disease onto enemies of her, and her followers. Along with extraordinary healing powers, she can take the form of any animal she desires, although she is normally depicted as a woman wearing a knee-length chiton, armed with bow and arrow, occasionally with a deer companion.
It's not a huge change, just a bit.
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